This is where I'm at right now, still have a lot of breakdowns that need to happen in the beginning and I have not animated the face at all yet. I appreciate any feedback, thanks for watching.
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hey justin. at this stage, i'd say you shouldn't animate the face.
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as far as the gag with the boomerang hat, im' not sure it's totally clear. it makes just as much sense to have someone offstage throw it back to him.
in general, the beats are hitting a little late, especially that last bit when the hat lands
thanks jeff. it's supposed to be someone off-stage throwing it back, but rewatching it i can see how one might interpret it as a boomerang-ing. I'll try to make that more clear as i tighten up the poses and timing.
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