I made a blocking of the final assignment. This is that the guy proposes to his girl friend, and she jumps in joy, runs and falls down. I'm wondering how to make the camera angle good poses. I appreciate if you'd give me any comments. :)
I'm really excited about your final. It's such a great take on the project. The only thoughts I really have to give at this stage is that you might want to give her one more beat for her and the audience to look at the ring before she grabs it from his hand. Also, it is a little hard to tell if she trips at the end or if she is suppossed to be fainting. Great start, though and I can't wait to see the final.
love the ending...but for most of it, she's in constant motion...i'd work out the footsteps and the overall pacing of the movement. you're probably going to want her going fast then slow in varied beats. also..her initial reaction would read better if she's in place for a little while longer..maybe hopping up and down to g et that sense of frenetic energy
I'm really excited about your final. It's such a great take on the project. The only thoughts I really have to give at this stage is that you might want to give her one more beat for her and the audience to look at the ring before she grabs it from his hand. Also, it is a little hard to tell if she trips at the end or if she is suppossed to be fainting. Great start, though and I can't wait to see the final.
ReplyDeletelove the ending...but for most of it, she's in constant motion...i'd work out the footsteps and the overall pacing of the movement. you're probably going to want her going fast then slow in varied beats. also..her initial reaction would read better if she's in place for a little while longer..maybe hopping up and down to g et that sense of frenetic energy
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