looking good! watch the footwork in places. when he intially runs there's a foot sliding back really fast...loses some weight because it seems to skate a bit love the hopping to open the door, but watch the sliding feet after he goes through
nice rhythm to this one. watch the up down of the pelvis (more please) on the walk out.
It's looking really good, the only thing I noticed that hasn't been mentioned already is that when he shifts his weight after he opens the door and takes those couple bounces backward it looks like he's changing direction a little too fast to start moving forward again. Great stuff.
good job! I like the timing...
ReplyDeleteThank you. Any feedback as to making it better?
ReplyDeletelooking good! watch the footwork in places. when he intially runs there's a foot sliding back really fast...loses some weight because it seems to skate a bit
ReplyDeletelove the hopping to open the door, but watch the sliding feet after he goes through
nice rhythm to this one. watch the up down of the pelvis (more please) on the walk out.
It's looking really good, the only thing I noticed that hasn't been mentioned already is that when he shifts his weight after he opens the door and takes those couple bounces backward it looks like he's changing direction a little too fast to start moving forward again. Great stuff.
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