Wednesday, October 20, 2010
critique plz
This is still near blocking stage i want to know if the ending is working or i should change it
Thank you
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This is still near blocking stage i want to know if the ending is working or i should change it
Thank you
The ending is good in my opinion. Make sure you really bounce the character. You have him going from stopped to running and he is pretty much a bowling ball on sticks. He needs to go way down before he hops into a run.
ReplyDeletesome good ideas here, but the whole thing seems like it's in slow motion. the bull like charge is cool, but the pelvis seems really locked in place...when he charges, he doesn't bear down into it
ReplyDeletewhen he gets into the slide, there's no plant into it.
Looks nice! At the end - when he's falling down it would help to let the big head lead the fall, and the feet would follow.
ReplyDeleteI like the bull like charge! May be you could make it more stronger by moving the weight of the head/pelvis whenever his right foot goes up in the air and maybe with the foot you could start off slow and when he picks it up accelerate it and plant it slowly. might give it some force.
ReplyDeleteYea i need to work on the timing when i posted this it was near the blocking stage so i didn't give much attention to weights but thanks for the wonderful feedback i can now dodge those obvious mistakes.....
ReplyDeleteIt's a fun idea. You may want to have him go completely off camera, because right now it looks like he stops a little too abruptly.
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