Hello everyone,
My name Tae-Hyung, but please call me Tae. [tay:]
I'm late to introduce my self because this week was very confused by the school schedule.
I'm from Korea, not the north, and I'd worked for 2D animation companies, and those companies had gone broke, so I build up a kind of animation company with my friends. Unfortunately, it also failed, and I fled from them to here. :)
I'm stuck on animation and I've passed a point no return. So I have to develop my skills. :)
Here is my the most recent animation. I appreciate you would give me any comment or critique,
Thanks.
Thanks for introducing yourself. Your animation looks pretty smooth and I can feel the weight. The composition also works pretty well but you can use adjustment on the silhouette. Make sure his silhouette reads in every position.
ReplyDeleteSome very nice things going on here. I like how you've structured the animation to have some buildup to it.
ReplyDeleteThe one thing that would help would be in taking more time to let certain actions read. For example, the hammering...it feels a little mechanical in that the speed of the hammer going back is the same as it is going forwards...putting some drag in the hammer on the way down and slowing the recoil back to the strike position would help a lot.
also, not sure why the second guy falls...i like the surprise of his gesture...maybe it might read more powerfully if he just bent over laughing?
Thanks for comments! The second man wakes up by the alarm suddenly. But it is too short, so it isn't clear what and why he is doing that. I made this clip for the 11 seconds compete, so I had to fit with the sound clip.
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